Monday, January 09, 2006

A New Poem (early draft)

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5 comments:

  1. I am sure this is totally off the point but lime green does seem to be the color these days.

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  2. "and because I’ve slit
    a throat, everyone thinks I’m strange."

    Rob, I know you're strange. But I really like these lines.

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  3. Audrey - I had no idea, but I'm delighted to hear it!

    Julie - Thanks. Am I strange? Maybe the strangeness only comes out in poems. Maybe.

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  4. Rob, I promise that I only think I see good strangeness, not puppykicking strangeness.

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  5. I like that phrase "puppykicking strangeness". But I'll remember to credit you if I ever use it!

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