tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16166950.post113287159167570613..comments2024-01-23T18:21:17.066+00:00Comments on Surroundings: TinkeringRobhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17046788730174617923noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16166950.post-1133076634201974422005-11-27T07:30:00.000+00:002005-11-27T07:30:00.000+00:00Maybe. But the "slow to" bothers me a little becau...Maybe. But the "slow to" bothers me a little because I really mean "never". I had "never" in the original draft and thought it might sound melodramatic, but in this case I think the possible hyperbole is true.Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17046788730174617923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16166950.post-1133010201165527912005-11-26T13:03:00.000+00:002005-11-26T13:03:00.000+00:00Would it help if you were to revert to the origina...Would it help if you were to revert to the original and amend the repeat line to:<BR/><BR/>"A smile is slow to die"Messalinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15973149790071270448noreply@blogger.com