I am a poet. But any subject is fair game here.
Good start. Like to see it when it's trimmed. Might be interesting to see the narrator sucked into the potential habitation, imagining himself a widower as well--implied--but I think that might benefit from being more explicit.
Thanks CE. I'll persevere with it.
Good start. Like to see it when it's trimmed. Might be interesting to see the narrator sucked into the potential habitation, imagining himself a widower as well--implied--but I think that might benefit from being more explicit.
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