Thursday, January 12, 2006

John Ash

No, not John Ashbery, but John Ash, a poet born in Manchester in 1948. I had read poems by him before, but only a few from anthologies.

I picked up John Ash’s third collection The Goodbyes from the Scottish Poetry Library on loan. It was published in 1982. I’ve only read a few poems so far, but already I’m hooked.

The first poem, Great Sonata I, begins with a fantastic image:

The pianist commences the sonata about the angels and the rain.
It is slow, so lingering we will soon be fast asleep

dreaming of pink rooms filled with musical animals and roses
while our teeth rot in sympathy, and outside
the autumn air grows dense as a preserving oil.

It’s the “teeth rot in sympathy” phrase and the description of autumn that follows that hooks me in. The description is so dynamic. The pink rooms aren’t a look back to innocent childhood, but something sickly and cloying, a mawkish escape from reality.

The poem continues:

We must start now on the long road back
to the ‘evidence of our senses’ but it is hard –
we may have to unlearn as much as we learn,

besides, we distrust all the approved maps and signposts…
So the threat arises of a sojourn as long as a life
in some commonplace purgatory
of cacophonous motels and braided intersections. Yet
these are not all that modern life has to offer us
and the town is not a monster to be run away from,
screaming into headlights and blank night: thus, escape
from one dilemma only lands us in the swamp
of another, and the smell is worse than ever…

So we have the dilemma that not to follow the approved maps is to end up not knowing where you’re going. The evidence of our senses involves unlearning, not an easy thing to do.
But escape is no answer. That only leads to more questions.
The thought is clear yet intriguing. The poem itself resembles its “cacophonous motels”.

The conclusion?

We could invoke tradition, speed up the film of the flower
or imitate the procedures of music, in the hope
that these evasions might lead us, by way of doors
casually thrown open as if nothing were at risk

back to the dim point of departure. But how
can this appear as it was? It is only a confusion
of inclined planes, corridors and theatre boxes –

a fake painting called ‘Melancholy Of The Set-Square’.

I was with him until the last line. Then I did a little research and found this article, which includes a paragraph on Durer’s painting, Melencolia I:

The picture is at once immediately legible and deeply ambiguous. Seated on a step outside a narrow building with a ladder leaning against it is a winged angel...
...Strewn about the ground are a variety of tools and instruments – a self-feeding furnace, or athanor, a polyhedron with a hammer lying beside it, a sphere, a set square, a pair of pincers, a plane, a handsaw, a ruler, three nails, and some sort of syringe...
...In the background is a stretch of coastline overlooking an alarmingly calm lake or sea, and in the sky a comet, a rainbow and a batlike figure brandishing a streamer with the inscription “Melencolia I”. The scene is steeped in a lugubrious grey twilight.
What makes Dürer’s picture so enigmatic is precisely this superabundance of objects: it is “overdetermined” – has too many clues and signposts pointing in similar but not quite identical directions.


That could be the answer. I wonder if it spoils the poem, as it’s quite an obscure reference (of course, I realise there probably is a simpler solution, and if anyone knows what it is, I'd be interested in any suggestions).

However, the rest of the poem is so intriguing that I’m almost prepared to forgive him. I’ll certainly keep reading the rest of the collection.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Rob,

You really are on the look for a way to express philosophical musings with strong poetry. Good example you brought.

Larry

Rob Mackenzie said...

Cheers Larry.
I'm really enjoying John Ash's book. It's full of terrific lines and interesting ideas.

Anonymous said...

Hi fellow poet, arrived at your blog by accident while looking up john ash on google. I write poety mainly in my native language chinese, but i do read quite a bit on ashbery, simic, berryman etc. I discover Ash from a book called "New British Poetry," and find his work very interesting. Have fun, Cheers..

Buqing

Background Artist said...

Desmond's words - John Ash (pimped up)

A pianist commencing, angels in the rain.
lingering alowly will soon be fast in a pink room filled with musical animals and roses
while our teeth rot in sympathy.

Outside autumn grows dense, oils a preserving air,
starting now on the long road back
the evidence of sense is hard, unlearning more than is learnt,

distrusted all approved maps and threat to arise on the sojourn through life
as some commonplace purgatory
of cacophonous motels and braided intersections, and yet modern life offering us
the town and monster to run away from,
screaming into headlights and blank night: escaping one dilemma thus only lead to a swamp
of one or another smelling worse than the heavenly dump

an eternal dilemma one map of approval not knowing the evidence of sense involves learning, not an easy length of poetry to fit a thing to.

So escape is no answer though ones thought is clear, intriguing the poem itself into a conclusion

one can invoke, sped up - tradition - the omaginary film of a flower
proceding to imitate music in evasions hope might lead one
casually thrown open foor
as if nothing were at risk

back to the dim point of departure. appear dim as it were only confusion, planes, corridors and the incline of a theatre box

painting called "Melancholy Of The Set-Square"

~

Yeah rabbie laddies mandbag me windy lover, lets get editing all we can on the plof through poetic utterance, be basil bunting if yer gotta, coz aint no use in telling tales to the kidder conmen stealing the emporers new clothe ms roberta aint s/he wind itself roberto?

K O O D Y T A ' S K O R N E R said...

agreed, the goodbyes is something of a fantastic read, simply one of the better volumes of poetry i've read in the last year. i was lucky enough last week to purchase a copy of this book for 1 euro in gent belgium, an impulse purchase based primarily on the strength of its wonderful cover art and a casual perusal of its interior contents which more than hinted at excellence. now i too am hooked, and will go out of my way to acquire more writings by this writer, a writer i had not previously heard of, let alone read. thanks for this post -- its refreshing to know that there are still a few smart people out there in the world...

gustave m.