Monday, January 09, 2006

A New Poem (early draft)

deleted while submission under consideration

5 comments:

Meander Knot Press said...

I am sure this is totally off the point but lime green does seem to be the color these days.

Julie Carter said...

"and because I’ve slit
a throat, everyone thinks I’m strange."

Rob, I know you're strange. But I really like these lines.

Rob Mackenzie said...

Audrey - I had no idea, but I'm delighted to hear it!

Julie - Thanks. Am I strange? Maybe the strangeness only comes out in poems. Maybe.

Julie Carter said...

Rob, I promise that I only think I see good strangeness, not puppykicking strangeness.

Rob Mackenzie said...

I like that phrase "puppykicking strangeness". But I'll remember to credit you if I ever use it!