I am a poet. But any subject is fair game here.
I like this one Rob. What a mis-spent youth you must have led - I'm envious.
It makes me think of a Louis Theroux TV programme, you capture the same sense of kitch/seediness/menace.I really like the threadbare carpet line.I'm not sure the title is as strong as the poem though. The Wasted Oasis would seem to do it more justice!
Thanks. I've made a few more revisions to it this morning and will probably post it out later today.Colin, in my mis-spent youth I made a lot of the wrong kind of mistakes, and wish I had made more awful ones of a kind I'd only pretend to regret now.Apprentice, Wasted Oasis? That sounds like it could be a poem...
darn here too! I hate missing things
You've probably missed less than you think!But if anyone wants a copy, send me an email (address at my profile), and I'll post you the poem.
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