I am a poet. But any subject is fair game here.
I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you. It is sticking with me.Vicky
This is great stuff Rob -really enjoyed your use of imagery in this strong poem.Just a quibble with the sudden change in the last stanza from 'poem' to 'poet,' which jarred with me.
Thanks!I also wondered about the final stanza. Maybe I'm pushing things a step further than the poem needs to go. I'll keep thinking on it.
I second Calleach about the last S, and third the others that this is very good. just think up a final "The poem" stroph.
Thanks Larry. I'm still thinking on a final stanza.
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I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you. It is sticking with me.
Vicky
This is great stuff Rob -really enjoyed your use of imagery in this strong poem.
Just a quibble with the sudden change in the last stanza from 'poem' to 'poet,' which jarred with me.
Thanks!
I also wondered about the final stanza. Maybe I'm pushing things a step further than the poem needs to go. I'll keep thinking on it.
I second Calleach about the last S, and third the others that this is very good. just think up a final "The poem" stroph.
Thanks Larry. I'm still thinking on a final stanza.
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