I am a poet. But any subject is fair game here.
Good start. Like to see it when it's trimmed. Might be interesting to see the narrator sucked into the potential habitation, imagining himself a widower as well--implied--but I think that might benefit from being more explicit.
Thanks CE. I'll persevere with it.
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Good start. Like to see it when it's trimmed. Might be interesting to see the narrator sucked into the potential habitation, imagining himself a widower as well--implied--but I think that might benefit from being more explicit.
Thanks CE. I'll persevere with it.
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