Saturday, June 16, 2007

Messing About (deleted)

..and look what happens. A (draft) poem, of sorts.

...which has now been deleted.

3 comments:

apprentice said...

Clever piece Rob, it would interesting to wonder what the world would have been like if we never set foot in a boat, think of all the strange things in the tideline we'd have no explanation for.

Last night's footage from Malta shows people will still risk its depths if desperate enough.

Cailleach said...

I agree, clever conceit that goes somewhere beyond that ocean. I do like that smart last line too.

Rob said...

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.